changeset 695:5931f16f098f

Docs: wording
author Franz Glasner <fzglas.hg@dom66.de>
date Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:01:37 +0200
parents 1ea88da082e2
children 44a702b32c01
files docs/man/man8/fpkg.rst sbin/fpkg
diffstat 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) [+]
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--- a/docs/man/man8/fpkg.rst	Tue Oct 01 18:57:25 2024 +0200
+++ b/docs/man/man8/fpkg.rst	Tue Oct 01 19:01:37 2024 +0200
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-audit(8)`
 
-    Call :command:`pkg audit` on the local host and all running
+    Call :command:`pkg audit` for the local host and for all running
     visible and compatible jails.
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-check-fast-track(8)`
@@ -50,18 +50,18 @@
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-check-upgrade(8)`
 
-    Call :command:`pkg upgrade -n` on the local host and all running
+    Call :command:`pkg upgrade -n` for the local host and for all running
     visible and compatible jails.
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-config(8)`
 
     Retrieve the value of a given :manpage:`pkg(8)` configuration
-    option on the local host and all running visible and
+    option for the local host and all running visible and
     compatible jails (:command:`pkg config`).
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-etcupdate-status(8)`
 
-    Call :command:`etcupdate status` on the local host and all running
+    Call :command:`etcupdate status` for the local host and all running
     visible jails.
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-update(8)`
@@ -71,17 +71,17 @@
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-upgrade(8)`
 
-    Call :command:`pkg upgrade` on the local host and all running
+    Call :command:`pkg upgrade` for the local host and all running
     visible and compatible jails.
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-uversion(8)`
 
-    Call :command:`freebsd-version -u` on the local host and all
+    Call :command:`freebsd-version -u` for the local host and for all
     running visible jails.
 
 :manpage:`fpkg-vv(8)`
 
-    Call :command:`pkg -vv` on the local host and all running visible
+    Call :command:`pkg -vv` for the local host and all running visible
     jails.
 
 
--- a/sbin/fpkg	Tue Oct 01 18:57:25 2024 +0200
+++ b/sbin/fpkg	Tue Oct 01 19:01:37 2024 +0200
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@
 
 
 #:
-#: The `pkg config name` command on the host and all running jails
+#: The `pkg config name` command for the host and all running jails
 #:
 #: Args:
 #:   $1 (str): the configuration option to retrieve to
@@ -332,7 +332,7 @@
 
 
 #:
-#: The `pkg -vv` command on the host and all running compatible jails
+#: The `pkg -vv` command for the host and all running compatible jails
 #:
 command_vv() {
     local _j _OLDIFS
@@ -353,7 +353,7 @@
 }
 
 #:
-#: Call `etcupdate status` on the host and all running jails
+#: Call `etcupdate status` for the host and all running jails
 #:
 command_etcupdate_status() {
     local _j _OLDIFS